Been playing with Liquify, opinions ?

Hi guys !

I'm new here, I just wanted your opinion on something I'm working on a project with a French musical artist. The goal is that each of the cover would represent a way of dying through typography.

Here is the first one, it's "Noyade", which basically mean Drowning in French.

So, I know most of y'all are not frenchies froggies, but is this understandable to u ?

thx


https://ibb.co/ZM88Vvx

Hi, if contextualized with the other graphics, it is probably easier to find a common thread.
What are the other ideas? Have you already sketched something?

I can't ready the second and third letter. I get where you wanna go with this but it needs to be a bit clearer to me.

Hi, I'm French. I find that it's not readable enough

You took a different and dissociative attitude. It can be taken as an artistic act and you have made the difference. That's why a design can be seen everywhere. I liked it very much.

It looks ok but try to add some gradient colors it will look amazing after that !