Hey

I don't know if I've done this before, but my head feels like an 18-wheeler just ran over it, so I'll make this as short as possible. I just want some feedback on some songs I finished. Neither the vocals or the melodies are mine, I basically made the drums and mastered the tracks so it sounds somewhat decent. feedback appreciated but not necessary, do what you want. I'd be happy if just listened to something.

Bout a Bag is pretty awesome. Specifically the drums. You did a good job makin some deep sounding bass. "Break up song" seems like it could be a little deeper with the bass. But your caption said it was an older song, so maybe you hadn't found your groove there yet. It's not bad, just some constructive criticism.

Some of the stuff sounds a little over-produced, like maybe too much reverb or echo. Again, it's not bad at all, just some stuff I noticed.

"Eyes Open" is really good. No notes. I just like it. It's got a real nice smooth sound. I could smoke to this one.

Over all, I kinda dig it.

Do you mostly fuck with hip-hop or do you do other styles?

09-01-2022, 08:59 PM

RockSalt Wrote: Bout a Bag is pretty awesome. Specifically the drums. You did a good job makin some deep sounding bass. "Break up song" seems like it could be a little deeper with the bass. But your caption said it was an older song, so maybe you hadn't found your groove there yet. It's not bad, just some constructive criticism.

Some of the stuff sounds a little over-produced, like maybe too much reverb or echo. Again, it's not bad at all, just some stuff I noticed.

"Eyes Open" is really good. No notes. I just like it. It's got a real nice smooth sound. I could smoke to this one.

Over all, I kinda dig it.

Do you mostly fuck with hip-hop or do you do other styles?

I mostly do hip-hop but I made a new one called "Anidote" that's more of a catchy pop/house type song