Goodbyes

https://soundcloud.com/user-horizon/goodbyes

a little beat I threw together, still learning quite a bit :c. meant to be rapped on.

I honestly feel you need to chill with the "ay" and the "ti" or whatever that is

I am also a percussionist, and I can't seem to find where beat 1 is until the end. That isn't good. If someone like me, who plays sextuplet paradiddlediddles at 180 bpm daily, can't find beat 1 in your beat. Then it is highly unlikely that anybody else will...

Tried to rap over this after listening to it a few times. I can sort of get it to work after the build, but it isn't consistant, since at the 9 second mark this "build up" i guess which sounds like someone doing the drip noise with their cheek is completely out of sync, and time with the music.

Also...not Drum & Bass..... This is an example of what Drum & Bass is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySaUSrLilUY

Goodbye threads are not allowed

19-08-2016, 10:31 AM

Aoki Wrote: Goodbye threads are not allowed

Aoki bot strikes again.

19-08-2016, 06:26 AM

Zenith Wrote: I honestly feel you need to chill with the "ay" and the "ti" or whatever that is

I am also a percussionist, and I can't seem to find where beat 1 is until the end. That isn't good. If someone like me, who plays sextuplet paradiddlediddles at 180 bpm daily, can't find beat 1 in your beat. Then it is highly unlikely that anybody else will...

Tried to rap over this after listening to it a few times. I can sort of get it to work after the build, but it isn't consistant, since at the 9 second mark this "build up" i guess which sounds like someone doing the drip noise with their cheek is completely out of sync, and time with the music.

Also...not Drum & Bass..... This is an example of what Drum & Bass is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySaUSrLilUY

yo yo yoooooooooooo appreciate the feedback a lot.

Ok so i'll explain one of ur comments: the "build up" was an fx included in a soundbox and next to it it says "160bpm" and the bpm on the track is 90, so ofcourse it sounds wierd but I'm not talented enough to actually make my own.

As for the genre label, I just do that for shits and giggles cuz idk what else to label the genre, its literally just a beat.

As for the "ay" and "ti" they're the only voices I really like that come with my soundpack that I use for now so I just use them to fill in stuff for practice.


Thank you zenith for your feedback, i'll def work on some of the shit you said but also you need to realize your acting like you think I think this is amazing and dope and im a professional beat maker..... like no zenith u idiet, i am just a new guy learning the ropes.

19-08-2016, 10:31 AM

Aoki Wrote: Goodbye threads are not allowed

S.A.V.A.G.E.

Shit is dope doe. Keep your work up!

One thing I could suggest you to do is follow the metronome more.

19-08-2016, 06:27 PM

Horizon Wrote:

19-08-2016, 06:26 AM

Zenith Wrote: I honestly feel you need to chill with the "ay" and the "ti" or whatever that is

I am also a percussionist, and I can't seem to find where beat 1 is until the end. That isn't good. If someone like me, who plays sextuplet paradiddlediddles at 180 bpm daily, can't find beat 1 in your beat. Then it is highly unlikely that anybody else will...

Tried to rap over this after listening to it a few times. I can sort of get it to work after the build, but it isn't consistant, since at the 9 second mark this "build up" i guess which sounds like someone doing the drip noise with their cheek is completely out of sync, and time with the music.

Also...not Drum & Bass..... This is an example of what Drum & Bass is https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySaUSrLilUY

yo yo yoooooooooooo appreciate the feedback a lot.

Ok so i'll explain one of ur comments: the "build up" was an fx included in a soundbox and next to it it says "160bpm" and the bpm on the track is 90, so ofcourse it sounds wierd but I'm not talented enough to actually make my own.

As for the genre label, I just do that for shits and giggles cuz idk what else to label the genre, its literally just a beat.

As for the "ay" and "ti" they're the only voices I really like that come with my soundpack that I use for now so I just use them to fill in stuff for practice.


Thank you zenith for your feedback, i'll def work on some of the shit you said but also you need to realize your acting like you think I think this is amazing and dope and im a professional beat maker..... like no zenith u idiet, i am just a new guy learning the ropes.

Stfu work harder >:(

Lol jk. I'm a harsh critic when it comes to people making music. I believe that if you critique things hard in the beginning, that means there is much less to clean later on

I do like those sound effects being used if used differently. (This is my own personal preference in how these are used)The "ay" I feel is good for hitting 2 and 4 so its like "dun,ay,dun,ay" like that. Something like Fancy by Iggy is a good example. And the "ti" is something I never hear, which I've only liked it in TRRNSTTR

Isn't there a way to change the BPM of an effect. If anything go in something like audacity and increase the wavelength

Glad to know you didn't take my criticisms personally. The beat has potential, but it falls short in some aspects. Keep at it, and I will keep listening :yus:

19-08-2016, 11:13 PM

Faded Wrote: One thing I could suggest you to do is follow the metronome more.

Word thank you, i'll try to improve on that next time.