Kripple T-Shirt

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The first S in the front view clashes with the white of the shirt's background color. The texture/shape of the design on the left side of the front view reminds me of a cow oddly. Also the first thing I mentioned about the first s in "SS" applies to the second as well. I get the effect of a worn away style was the goal but it's overdone and makes the text hard to read. Maybe try to use smaller cutaways in larger numbers rather then a smaller number of large decays.

30-11-2016, 03:18 AM

Kayo Wrote: The first S in the front view clashes with the white of the shirt's background color. The texture/shape of the design on the left side of the front view reminds me of a cow oddly. Also the first thing I mentioned about the first s in "SS" applies to the second as well. I get the effect of a worn away style was the goal but it's overdone and makes the text hard to read. Maybe try to use smaller cutaways in larger numbers rather then a smaller number of large decays.

Yeah that's the problem I noticed with the S's,and yeahI was trying to achieve that kind of style but with the luxurious street wear feel to it. I'll make surethe font, size & pattern are more noticeable. Thanks

No opinions on the back design?

30-11-2016, 03:31 AM

Creativity Wrote: Yeah that's the problem I noticed with the S's,and yeahI was trying to achieve that kind of style but with the luxurious street wear feel to it. I'll make surethe font, size & pattern are more noticeable. Thanks

No opinions on the back design?

The back design seems pretty clean and simple but at the same time I feel as if a logo would fit better then just text along the back. I'm starting to see what you were going for now. At first glance of the shirt it just reminded me of the texture of a cow. To make it look more faded away as to say you should include the same texture of the dots where you want it to fade away rather than just painting over it. Painting over it makes it seem like a completely different object on top of the background instead of the borders chiseling away into the background. I do really like the layout however. Also, try experimenting with where the outlines fade away making some sharper and a little more aggressive as to say. Maybe include some worn away areas inside the borders themselves as well that vary in sizes. Just experiment with some things really.

30-11-2016, 03:42 AM

Kayo Wrote: The back design seems pretty clean and simple but at the same time I feel as if a logo would fit better then just text along the back. I'm starting to see what you were going for now. At first glance of the shirt it just reminded me of the texture of a cow. To make it look more faded away as to say you should include the same texture of the dots where you want it to fade away rather than just painting over it. Painting over it makes it seem like a completely different object on top of the background instead of the borders chiseling away into the background. I do really like the layout however. Also, try experimenting with where the outlines fade away making some sharper and a little more aggressive as to say. Maybe include some worn away areas inside the borders themselves as well that vary in sizes. Just experiment with some things really.

Do you mean something like this? -



And thanks for your feedback, it was really what I needed <3

30-11-2016, 04:53 PM

Creativity Wrote: Do you mean something like this? -

And thanks for your feedback, it was really what I needed <3

Anytime <3 and yeah that back design looks a bit easier on the eyes in my opinion.

Images doesnt work for me :(