Natural Thoughts

This is beautiful.
You are beautiful.
I love this.

03-12-2016, 01:30 AM

Nyan Wrote: This is beautiful.
You are beautiful.
I love this.

<3

Maybe make natural thoughts a little smaller but overall very creative.

03-12-2016, 02:01 AM

Nebula Wrote: Maybe make natural thoughts a little smaller but overall very creative.

Noted

Is that a hood? It looks like a hood.

Maybe zoom in a bit more (reduce the amount of space the hood takes) and pick another scene with thicker and more robust trees. Maybe try having a sign or a piece of paper that you can plant the words onto so it doesn't seem as though it's just a floating text with a curve. I'd say do what I suggested with the last one, try to make it as if someone had carved the words into a/the tree(s). It'll give it that more natural feel and if you can perform it right, it'll be extremely clean.

Try to inscribe we are slaughtered for toilet paper into the tree in the middle, and overlay something else, the hood looks a bit off.

How high were you when you made this?

03-12-2016, 03:22 AM

Silence Wrote: Is that a hood? It looks like a hood.

Maybe zoom in a bit more (reduce the amount of space the hood takes) and pick another scene with thicker and more robust trees. Maybe try having a sign or a piece of paper that you can plant the words onto so it doesn't seem as though it's just a floating text with a curve. I'd say do what I suggested with the last one, try to make it as if someone had carved the words into a/the tree(s). It'll give it that more natural feel and if you can perform it right, it'll be extremely clean.

Will have an updated version with your feedback included sometime today.

You want the image to have a darker impact making the message more meaningful, and yeah thanks I'll have sometime done by today/tonight.

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03-12-2016, 06:01 AM

Noah Wrote: Try to inscribe we are slaughtered for toilet paper into the tree in the middle, and overlay something else, the hood looks a bit off.

Will do. And it's the way the hood is hanging off at the top & also the peculiar angle.

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03-12-2016, 06:08 AM

Conditional Wrote: How high were you when you made this?

Can you get high off music?

Lmfao.

I'm not a big fan of the outline or effects you gave to the text. I would have centered the text and used a thinner font to give it a more "philosophical" look.
The photo is awesome tho. Good job my friend!