Rate this background #2

Hello human.

I have made a new background, this time with two variations.

I feel that variation #2 is hard on the eyes but still want to get feedback.

if you want one of these in your resolution/color just say and I will give it to you.

added #3



VARIATION#1:


VARIATION #2:

VARIATION #3:

VARIATION #2 is good.

15-05-2017, 11:54 PM

Glunar Wrote: VARIATION #2 is good.

What about new #3

16-05-2017, 12:00 AM

SmellySock Wrote: What about new #3

A lot of red, i don't like it. Make it #1 or #2 in my opinion.

imo they're all eh.

nothing special about them.

16-05-2017, 12:01 AM

Necro Wrote: imo they're all eh.

nothing special about them.

The purpose of this thread is for you to tell me WHY not what.
It is meant to be simplistic.

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16-05-2017, 12:01 AM

Glunar Wrote: A lot of red, i don't like it. Make it #1 or #2 in my opinion.

Which would you most likely use as a desktop background?

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16-05-2017, 12:01 AM

Glunar Wrote: A lot of red, i don't like it. Make it #1 or #2 in my opinion.

Also made this one but I didn'tput it because I couldn'tget it lined up properly

Overall design, too basic. Looks like someone went into MS Paint and drew a filled rectangle with an outline, and added that triangle bit in the corner, which is a bit too far to the right of the upper-left corner. Color choice is alright I guess, but could be better.

Variation 1: Doesn't look like anything special tbh, don't know what you'd use that kind of thing for except for maybe like a UI panel. I know you're trying to go simplistic, but as the design stands right now, you're better off with going minimal with only an outline or a solid background color.
Variation 2: Too harsh on the eyes. The contrast between the scanline-like bars and the gray is too demanding, it would probably draw attention away from whatever you were going to slap on top of it. Also doesn't look too great, maybe it's the thickness of the bars but it could just be that it's not a good idea in general.
Variation 3: Color choice is bad, also suffers from the same flaw as Variation 1.

All in all,I've seen worse, but I have definitely also seen better.

EDIT: The version in your post above this oneis a little bit better but suffers from the same flaw as Variation 2.

16-05-2017, 12:19 AM

fdigl Wrote: Overall design, too basic. Looks like someone went into MS Paint and drew a filled rectangle with an outline, and added that triangle bit in the corner, which is a bit too far to the right of the upper-left corner. Color choice is alright I guess, but could be better.

Variation 1: Doesn't look like anything special tbh, don't know what you'd use that kind of thing for except for maybe like a UI panel. I know you're trying to go simplistic, but as the design stands right now, you're better off with going minimal with only an outline or a solid background color.
Variation 2: Too harsh on the eyes. The contrast between the scanline-like bars and the gray is too demanding, it would probably draw attention away from whatever you were going to slap on top of it. Also doesn't look too great, maybe it's the thickness of the bars but it could just be that it's not a good idea in general.
Variation 3: Color choice is bad, also suffers from the same flaw as Variation 1.

All in all,I've seen worse, but I have definitely also seen better.

EDIT: The version in your post above this oneis a little bit better but suffers from the same flaw as Variation 2.

Thank you for an honest and useful reply!
I am going to see if a "glow" effect could help with what you expressed about #2

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16-05-2017, 12:19 AM

fdigl Wrote: Overall design, too basic. Looks like someone went into MS Paint and drew a filled rectangle with an outline, and added that triangle bit in the corner, which is a bit too far to the right of the upper-left corner. Color choice is alright I guess, but could be better.

Variation 1: Doesn't look like anything special tbh, don't know what you'd use that kind of thing for except for maybe like a UI panel. I know you're trying to go simplistic, but as the design stands right now, you're better off with going minimal with only an outline or a solid background color.
Variation 2: Too harsh on the eyes. The contrast between the scanline-like bars and the gray is too demanding, it would probably draw attention away from whatever you were going to slap on top of it. Also doesn't look too great, maybe it's the thickness of the bars but it could just be that it's not a good idea in general.
Variation 3: Color choice is bad, also suffers from the same flaw as Variation 1.

All in all,I've seen worse, but I have definitely also seen better.

EDIT: The version in your post above this oneis a little bit better but suffers from the same flaw as Variation 2.

I don't know what happened...

Anyway I crave slept ned ned some I will get back to it in the day of the morowland

Okay, there isn't much to be said about this "design" or it's variations. There is no focal point, no proper contrasts, no depth, no actual "design" to speak of. This isn't simplistic design, it barely can be called a design at all. Design is suppose to resemble something, this doesn't. (Well other than a flat surface with a red outline.) Try to research some "minimalist" and "simplistic" designs before trying to make another one.

I like variation 2!