My 0wn portfolio

08-06-2017, 02:52 PM

Hunhow Wrote: After 2 seconds, I concluded that there is a few... Problems here. For starters, the two first images either look like they were made with a generating tool for sorts, or a closely followed tutorial. (As it looks like a poor replica of a tutorial from a more skilled artist.) Guess what, I found these tutorials which are... Too much alike for it to be a coincidence.

HyperLight Tutorial
80's Logo Effect Tutorial

The last tutorial being the better example here. (As your is by all means, a poor replica of said tutorial.) Which brings into question. What exactly is your work and what isn't? While following step-by-step tutorials can be a nice way to learn new things, it by no means makes the final product "yours" anymore than if you took someone else's file and claimed it as your own. Which brings me to the next part. The "GTA 5-Esque" logo... It is a bit of a quality gap in it.

The big "Z" is all fine and dandy, and nothing to comment on it. The issue lies with the "Zer0w" and banner around it. The banner is clearly not made for the "Z" as seen at the bottom left of it. The "Zer0w" is crudely placed and looks like someone placed a random text over a stock image. So the question here is, what exactly did you make yourself? Because right now it looks like you took a PSD template and altered the text of it.

Yup. I mentioned the 80's effect one, found the tutorial as well. It's not wise to use a tutorial made design in a portfolio.

08-06-2017, 02:52 PM

Hunhow Wrote: After 2 seconds, I concluded that there is a few... Problems here. For starters, the two first images either look like they were made with a generating tool for sorts, or a closely followed tutorial. (As it looks like a poor replica of a tutorial from a more skilled artist.) Guess what, I found these tutorials which are... Too much alike for it to be a coincidence.

HyperLight Tutorial
80's Logo Effect Tutorial

The last tutorial being the better example here. (As your is by all means, a poor replica of said tutorial.) Which brings into question. What exactly is your work and what isn't? While following step-by-step tutorials can be a nice way to learn new things, it by no means makes the final product "yours" anymore than if you took someone else's file and claimed it as your own. Which brings me to the next part. The "GTA 5-Esque" logo... It is a bit of a quality gap in it.

The big "Z" is all fine and dandy, and nothing to comment on it. The issue lies with the "Zer0w" and banner around it. The banner is clearly not made for the "Z" as seen at the bottom left of it. The "Zer0w" is crudely placed and looks like someone placed a random text over a stock image. So the question here is, what exactly did you make yourself? Because right now it looks like you took a PSD template and altered the text of it.

Yup. I mentioned the 80's effect one, found the tutorial as well. It's not wise to use a tutorial made design in a portfolio.

It looks great, I used to watch a youtuber with an intro similar to your first image so I think it's from the same tut

A lot of these look really nice, good job. If you're looking to host these on a site so people can look at your work more conveniently you can use Carbonmade, Behance, Adobe Portfolio, and a few others.

Nice Graphics. Are you creating Wallpaper?

Very nice / .

your 3d animation looks very nice dude

Glad you all like it.

looks really nice, you got a gift man congrat. Really nice!

Do you sell some of your works? im interested hahahah

All of them look gucci except the 3d animation one, it feels too slow in my opinion