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Simple Light Thread Design

Submitted by TheMonvster, , Thread ID: 120399

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05-02-2019, 09:14 PM
This post was last modified: 05-02-2019, 09:27 PM by TheMonvster
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What do you think?

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#2
not bad what did you make it in Photoshop? Its very lightweight I like it

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

OP
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08-02-2019, 02:14 AM
FryFry Wrote:
not bad what did you make it in Photoshop? Its very lightweight I like it


Everything I do I do in paint.net

https://daylightdesign.carbonmade.com/

IMO paint.net is way more easy to use than Photoshop, it does have some features that Photoshop doesn't, and doesn't utilize that many resources compared to Photoshop.

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#4
i lowkey like the fact thats iot so blue and white, looks great. also for something done in paint.net quite good!

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RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#6
IMO, the price (numbers) look a bit too big for the square boxes they are in.
But other than that, looks clean and simple! Goodjob.

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#7
Looks very clean and professional, I would maybe go with some more gradients either in the blue boxes or a big background gradient.

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#8
I think the 'P' in Plans looks more like a 'D'
Other than that, not too bad at all! Smile

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#9
Nice design, btw i think you should correct the Text and Number (About the price) inside the boxes. Example: Basic i think isn't centered to the box.

RE: Simple Light Thread Design

#10
This thread design is very inconsistent. When choosing text size, make then proportional at the very least. The price numbers are way too big. Literally as big as the title. Ocean host title is okay the way it is. The "headlines" like features and plans should be 3 times smaller, at least 2 times. There's a lot of text inconsistencies.

The icons look like they were grabbed from random icon packs, they each have different styles and don't look unified.

Almost everything is off centered, from the text, icons, and boxes.

The flow of the thread design is very odd. For example the way you showcase the features. 2 separate rounded corner rectangles. Would have been better if it was in just one.

The readability of the title font is not great. Remember, the whole point of a thread design is to clearly get the message across to the viewer. Don't make it hard for them to figure out what things are, even if it may be obvious. For example, "Plans" (I assume is what it says), the P looks like a D. Rule of thumb with fonts is to use no more than two different fonts. But at least keep it clear.

This is not clean and professional like the other user stated.

You still have to practice more on the objective aspect of designing these things. You'll get there though.
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RE: Simple Light Thread Design

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This thread design is very inconsistent. When choosing text size, make then proportional at the very least. The price numbers are way too big. Literally as big as the title. Ocean host title is okay the way it is. The "headlines" like features and plans should be 3 times smaller, at least 2 times. There's a lot of text inconsistencies.

The icons look like they were grabbed from random icon packs, they each have different styles and don't look unified.

Almost everything is off centered, from the text, icons, and boxes.

The flow of the thread design is very odd. For example the way you showcase the features. 2 separate rounded corner rectangles. Would have been better if it was in just one.

The readability of the title font is not great. Remember, the whole point of a thread design is to clearly get the message across to the viewer. Don't make it hard for them to figure out what things are, even if it may be obvious. For example, "Plans" (I assume is what it says), the P looks like a D. Rule of thumb with fonts is to use no more than two different fonts. But at least keep it clear.

This is not clean and professional like the other user stated.

You still have to practice more on the objective aspect of designing these things. You'll get there though.
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