My Very First Sales Thread

White background is tooo empty, you could do a lot more in that space

Looks good overall, I'm not sure about that white overlay though, might look better with other images besides wood

Verry cool thead design. Looks good overall etc..!

Looks good and appealing, I think is mission accomplished. Looks Sleek.

Beside the very white background it looks very clean. Maybe use a little more grey?

I think it looks great but the white pulls the viewers attention from the content.

Looks good for a concept design however there are a few major issues. All of the white glare effects used cause an issue in contrast with your graphics and color scheme. The white on white is blinding in all honesty and could quickly turn away any potential customers who are sensitive to bright colors such as these on a digital screen. The font choice is good, but the switches between white and black again create contrast issues. You may consider changing the wood out for something a little more modern such as a blue/grey/black gradient with a textured base.

Overall good, I'd say 6/10. Just needs some revising.

You should look at dribbble before you start, make moodboard - because your site looks em... not amazing

sales thread looks good to me, idk you tell me bro