Feedback on my song?

i like the beat, the first verse sounds like muffled, maybe its supposed to be like that? But it clears up at around 0:33. Theres alot of use of the word bitch, bitches, etc, Doesnt really flow all that well in my eyes. Not bad.

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22-06-2019, 03:33 AM

koreanspy Wrote: i like the beat, the first verse sounds like muffled, maybe its supposed to be like that? But it clears up at around 0:33. Theres alot of use of the word bitch, bitches, etc, Doesnt really flow all that well in my eyes. Not bad.

Just listened to "Cant go like that" I like that one a bit better, If that means anything,

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22-06-2019, 03:33 AM

koreanspy Wrote: i like the beat, the first verse sounds like muffled, maybe its supposed to be like that? But it clears up at around 0:33. Theres alot of use of the word bitch, bitches, etc, Doesnt really flow all that well in my eyes. Not bad.

Just listened to "Cant go like that" I like that one a bit better, If that means anything,