I honestly feel you need to chill with the "ay" and the "ti" or whatever that is
I am also a percussionist, and I can't seem to find where beat 1 is until the end. That isn't good. If someone like me, who plays sextuplet paradiddlediddles at 180 bpm daily, can't find beat 1 in your beat. Then it is highly unlikely that anybody else will...
Tried to rap over this after listening to it a few times. I can sort of get it to work after the build, but it isn't consistant, since at the 9 second mark this "build up" i guess which sounds like someone doing the drip noise with their cheek is completely out of sync, and time with the music.