Maybe zoom in a bit more (reduce the amount of space the hood takes) and pick another scene with thicker and more robust trees. Maybe try having a sign or a piece of paper that you can plant the words onto so it doesn't seem as though it's just a floating text with a curve. I'd say do what I suggested with the last one, try to make it as if someone had carved the words into a/the tree(s). It'll give it that more natural feel and if you can perform it right, it'll be extremely clean.