Simple enough to follow I hope. If you think I'm talking about rocks, read it again.
Quote:Water damage. Dust carried by wind. Broken resistances. The new cracks and smooth faces on the rock. A sculpture formed over decades by
Esoteric processes of design. The carvers image Practiced only by the forebearer. Natural forces shaping forever,
Revealing granite atop a front of chiseled marble. Windows of jade above yards of topaz. A vein of ruby beneath. Eroded from years of experience.
Any feedback is appreciated, I'm still not fantastic with poetry and try to use as wide a variety of words as I can. And I'm looking for feedback. What parts did you like? What parts can I improve? It's not a matter of "yeah i liked it" if you don't even understand what it's about (shouldn't be too hard to figure out with the last stanza.)
