Quick 9 line poem.

02-03-2018, 07:10 PM

Deadboy Wrote: Simple enough to follow I hope.
If you think I'm talking about rocks, read it again.


Any feedback is appreciated, I'm still not fantastic with poetry and try to use as wide a variety of words as I can.
And I'm looking for feedback. What parts did you like? What parts can I improve? It's not a matter of "yeah i liked it" if you don't even understand what it's about (shouldn't be too hard to figure out with the last stanza.)

you should continue to develop in this