Blur City Design [Design for a Shop]

Hey, this is another thread design that i have made.

This has potential. Just a few touch-ups will make this design more polished. Make the text justified, it will make the text appear as if it's unified in a box, not random lines of ordered text. Work on alignment. For example the first paragraph and the paper icon needs to be lower. The three boxes are not perfectly centered. The crown is not centered in the middle box. Also the crown looks odd. Maybe using a style like the paper icon? Font choice looks odd for the title. Just use one font for title. All in all, it's a pretty clean design.

This has potential. Just a few touch-ups will make this design more polished. Make the text justified, it will make the text appear as if it's unified in a box, not random lines of ordered text. Work on alignment. For example the first paragraph and the paper icon needs to be lower. The three boxes are not perfectly centered. The crown is not centered in the middle box. Also the crown looks odd. Maybe using a style like the paper icon? Font choice looks odd for the title. Just use one font for title. All in all, it's a pretty clean design.

Very Nice Design, Like Theos said has a lot of potential! Good luck.

What a clean black and white design. Minimalism to the max!

this looks really good for my shop, thank you!

Very clean i like it alot

The typography is not good with other element. Maybe if you put a light fonts ?

awesome files, just font is missing for me got a link to it?

Very nice great work ! i hope a day i'll use photoshop like a pro