Gummy is art

by Gummy - 07-02-2016, 07:41 AM
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Posted: 07-02-2016, 07:41 AM
WARNING | NSFW

There is a dick, so don't complain please. Anyways, any rating on the art itself would be nice.


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Posted: 07-02-2016, 07:47 AM
(07-02-2016, 07:41 AM)Gummy Wrote: WARNING | NSFW

There is a dick, so don't complain please. Anyways, any rating on the art itself would be nice.

Art: 7/10
Art with rice: 9/10
Art with dick: 11/10

Seriously though, you're a great artist. I can only dream about making stuff like that. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: 07-02-2016, 07:49 AM
(07-02-2016, 07:47 AM)maiki Wrote: Art with rice: 9/10

wtf where did I put rice in my picture? XD
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Posted: 07-02-2016, 07:50 AM
(07-02-2016, 07:49 AM)Gummy Wrote:
(07-02-2016, 07:47 AM)maiki Wrote: Art with rice: 9/10

wtf where did I put rice in my picture? XD

Sorry, shitty reddit meme.
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Posted: 07-02-2016, 07:51 AM
(07-02-2016, 07:50 AM)maiki Wrote:
(07-02-2016, 07:49 AM)Gummy Wrote:
(07-02-2016, 07:47 AM)maiki Wrote: Art with rice: 9/10

wtf where did I put rice in my picture? XD

Sorry, shitty reddit meme.

Please, no memes on my work.
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Posted: 07-02-2016, 08:55 AM
(07-02-2016, 07:47 AM)maiki Wrote: Art with dick: 11/10
^this :hurr:

Art: 8/10
I think there a couple of areas that can be improved on.
- The hands are not proportional to the rest of the body. It seems a bit small or fingers are too short? Maybe add more defining lines to emphasize that the fingers are bent so that it doesn't look short and fat.
- Wrist. The transition from the hand to the arm is really awkward. 
- Neck seems a bit short...specially since it's anime/manga where male characters usually have long defined necks. I guess you wanted it to appear as if he's leaning in but it just looks short imo. 
- Hand-Arm-Shoulder distances. From the wrist it almost goes straight towards the upper arm. This could be because the right shoulder (our POV) is narrow compared to the other side. 
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Just improve on the use of space and making sure that the body parts do not appear biologically awkward whether irl or in an anime/manga perspective. Though I would understand as this is a rough sketch. Good job on the drawing. You really have talent. Just keep practicing!  Smile
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