(07-02-2016, 06:47 AM)maiki Wrote: Art with dick: 11/10
I think there a couple of areas that can be improved on.
- The hands are not proportional to the rest of the body. It seems a bit small or fingers are too short? Maybe add more defining lines to emphasize that the fingers are bent so that it doesn't look short and fat.
- Wrist. The transition from the hand to the arm is really awkward.
- Neck seems a bit short...specially since it's anime/manga where male characters usually have long defined necks. I guess you wanted it to appear as if he's leaning in but it just looks short imo.
- Hand-Arm-Shoulder distances. From the wrist it almost goes straight towards the upper arm. This could be because the right shoulder (our POV) is narrow compared to the other side.
Just improve on the use of space and making sure that the body parts do not appear biologically awkward whether irl or in an anime/manga perspective. Though I would understand as this is a rough sketch. Good job on the drawing. You really have talent. Just keep practicing!