Logo I made for my community

Any thoughts?

I'd give it around a 4/10
It really looks like just a render over text
You should look up typography tutorials or something like that
I can even help you in like a week when I'm out of this shithole military school

Remade it in Cinema4D. I think I did a good job.

this need to be smoother with more color !
two JPEG placed over text...
you can do better