#bars x4

11-12-2015, 12:41 AM

Natsu Wrote:

11-12-2015, 12:37 AM

Krept Wrote: I like it but it's pretty mainsteam. Try telling a story with some puns and good wordplay involved then you'll be one level closer to becoming a savage.
I don't understand the S and C bit though.

SC - South Carolina
"start with the thrower then bring out the flame" - referring to a flame thrower, rap is widely known for good verses to be known as 'fire'
"If I see 12 I bolt like Usain" - Usain Bolt

3 very good puns and excellent wordplay so idk what you mean.

Oh okay.
I'm not saying you didn't include them, I'm saying you should try and mix it up with story-telling and see where it gets you.