I need your criticism

you clearly got skills and experience, the transitions and general movement of the video feel snappy. only thing i'll say is maybe add some saturation or colour grading or distortion to the footage, cause it looks quite 'regular', like it's been filmed on a phone camera without filters.
Not a bad thing if that's the vibe you're going for, but considering that your editing style has some trippy elements, you've got quick cuts and its dynamic and visually pleasing, i feel like it would match with the video a lot more if the video had some colour grading/saturation/distortion. i think distorting the video in some subtle way could help with making it feel more layered and complex.