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I need your criticism

Submitted by Ovi, , Thread ID: 268305

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#11
you clearly got skills and experience, the transitions and general movement of the video feel snappy. only thing i'll say is maybe add some saturation or colour grading or distortion to the footage, cause it looks quite 'regular', like it's been filmed on a phone camera without filters.
Not a bad thing if that's the vibe you're going for, but considering that your editing style has some trippy elements, you've got quick cuts and its dynamic and visually pleasing, i feel like it would match with the video a lot more if the video had some colour grading/saturation/distortion. i think distorting the video in some subtle way could help with making it feel more layered and complex.

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Warned
#12
thats good keep moving !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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#13
its already perfect but i still see some rough mask and needed to be feathered a little

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#14
this is extremely cool bro, what tutorials did you use?

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#15
That looks great man, it looks very unique and smooth. What tutorials (if u did) did you use for it?

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#16
02-07-2023, 12:24 PM
Ovi Wrote:
I shoot and edit videos.
Now practicing rotoscope
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qFLCRN0scEk
it gets the vibe across quite clearly tbh. some of the transitions could be considered distracting by snobs, but it gets the point across and the message is clear.

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#17
this is amazing bro, keep it up!

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#18
cool video, good editing...i would suggest grading the transitions/overlays to match the footage a bit more, then one big color grade overtop to make it come together...would make grain smaller

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#19
ehh the vid is okay could be better tho tbh. try working on your skills

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