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Quick 9 line poem.

Submitted by Deadboy, , Thread ID: 77940

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RE: Quick 9 line poem.

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04-03-2018, 11:33 PM
Deadboy Wrote:
... Yeah. Leeching ass.
I got a few views but no responses. Cmon guys, I can't get any better if I don't know what to work on.

Deadboy Poems great dude sorry for the leecher's responses there always gonna agree wit you.
Anyway Add more metaphors and Stanza's right now I'd give it an 8.5/10

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