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Quick 9 line poem.

Submitted by Deadboy, , Thread ID: 77940

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RE: Quick 9 line poem.

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04-03-2018, 11:39 PM
MrPirate Wrote:
Deadboy Poems great dude sorry for the leecher's responses there always gonna agree wit you.
Anyway Add more metaphors and Stanza's right now I'd give it an 8.5/10

Mmm, alright. Went with something short just taking some inspo from Astrophil and Stella. I'll see what I can cough up next time haha.

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