11-12-2015, 12:37 AMKrept Wrote: I like it but it's pretty mainsteam. Try telling a story with some puns and good wordplay involved then you'll be one level closer to becoming a savage.
I don't understand the S and C bit though.
SC - South Carolina
"start with the thrower then bring out the flame" - referring to a flame thrower, rap is widely known for good verses to be known as 'fire'
"If I see 12 I bolt like Usain" - Usain Bolt
3 very good puns and excellent wordplay so idk what you mean.