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Blur City Design [Design for a Shop]
Submitted by Azsoul, 09-02-2017, 10:01 PM, Thread ID: 29345
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RE: Blur City Design [Design for a Shop] 09-02-2017, 10:11 PM #2 This has potential. Just a few touch-ups will make this design more polished. Make the text justified, it will make the text appear as if it's unified in a box, not random lines of ordered text. Work on alignment. For example the first paragraph and the paper icon needs to be lower. The three boxes are not perfectly centered. The crown is not centered in the middle box. Also the crown looks odd. Maybe using a style like the paper icon? Font choice looks odd for the title. Just use one font for title. All in all, it's a pretty clean design. ![[Image: zzmObkB.gif]](https://i.imgur.com/zzmObkB.gif)
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09-02-2017, 10:11 PM
#2 This has potential. Just a few touch-ups will make this design more polished. Make the text justified, it will make the text appear as if it's unified in a box, not random lines of ordered text. Work on alignment. For example the first paragraph and the paper icon needs to be lower. The three boxes are not perfectly centered. The crown is not centered in the middle box. Also the crown looks odd. Maybe using a style like the paper icon? Font choice looks odd for the title. Just use one font for title. All in all, it's a pretty clean design.