Beat I made

https://soundcloud.com/user-horizon/yo-relax-v2


let me know what you guys think im new to music beats n shit, took me like an hour to make.

Very repetitive and makes me fall asleep.

Its not bad horizon you sound familiar

21-07-2016, 09:21 PM

GamesPuff Wrote: Its not bad horizon you sound familiar

what do you mean

This is pretty nice.
Having it on playing on the background and posting stuff on NulledBB :p

Were you stoned when you made this? And I fucking love it.

21-07-2016, 09:25 PM

Horizon Wrote:

21-07-2016, 09:21 PM

GamesPuff Wrote: Its not bad horizon you sound familiar

what do you mean

I think i know you can you pm me to talk more?

22-07-2016, 12:58 AM

Inanimate Wrote: This is kinda harsh but...

It's offbeat, as in instruments don't align up with others.

It's extremely repetitive, and I could tell that after the first few seconds of the song.

And the woman speaking in the beginning of it was eerie and out of place.

But, it still was relaxing-ish and it is clear that if you fine-tuned some aspects of the song then maybe it might be enjoyable for me.

Then again I listen to Death Grips so I probably won't enjoy the relaxing music...

Death Grips are amazing. I love that group and listen to them stoned all the time. Such a unique group.

Also I'm aware that the instruments are off, i just started and still studying music theory and shit like that. It's pretty hard. Thanks for your criticism though i'll try to work on it.

It has an ambient feel to it, I could see it in the background of something like a yoga video. It's a good start, but as some of the other comments have said the alignment could use some work. Nothing that can't be fixed over time though, keep at it.

The drums sound off-beat and just not good imo.