Dear, Father

by Gummy - 29-12-2015, 05:02 PM
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Posted: 29-12-2015, 05:02 PM
Song I made - https://soundcloud.com/finn-850349807/dear-father

Lyrics -
10 letters
10 minutes
10 thoughts of suicide. I guess i'll give in.
I just thought id take a minute of my time.
This isn't a song, I just get emo and rhyme.
Now the world listen. Everyone gather and die.
Don't confuse me for the white guy who shot up a school.
I only did that once, but in the end I was a fool.
Clearly I had no idea that I was sad.
Suicide thoughts because of my dad.
I just couldn't comprehend the reason, it didn't make sense.
Word to my father, I should have shot you instead.
I know that we never met, but I can take a bet.
That if we ever met, I would kill you in a sec.
Now to close this letter, and hang my head.
The rope is tied, this will be my final breathe.
The gun to my head, I guess i'm finally glad..
No more thoughts of being alone or sad.
Goodbye Dad.
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Posted: 29-12-2015, 05:10 PM
The gun to my head, I guess i'm finally gladd, No more thoughts of being alone or sad.
8/10
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Posted: 29-12-2015, 05:12 PM
(29-12-2015, 05:10 PM)v4hl Wrote: The gun to my head, I guess i'm finally gladd, No more thoughts of being alone or sad.
8/10

i rate it emo/10
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Posted: 29-12-2015, 05:31 PM
7/10. Nice job bruh.
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Posted: 29-12-2015, 05:54 PM
8/10 this song like my stories :'(((
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Posted: 30-12-2015, 11:40 PM
Thanks for the lyrics !
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Posted: 31-12-2015, 11:10 AM
9/10 near perfection bro!
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