E-Sports Direwolf.

Looks really good. I like it. It's clean and sharp and the colors suits my taste.

Great work! =)

08-02-2018, 02:41 AM

Carpesir Wrote: Looks really good. I like it. It's clean and sharp and the colors suits my taste.

Great work! =)

Thank you sir <3 Took 2 days to make this since it was my first ever E-Sports Logo

It's pretty cool.

You need to work on lighting, doesn't look consistent.

Tounge and teeth don't have highlights or shadows.

There are some rough areas. Theres a weird bump on top of stroke. The stroke on the bottom covers the text. There are some white parts around the black stroke. Bottom of the wolf's chin, is a buttchin. It's causing weird point under chin stroke.

The text's atempt at making it look shine looks awkward.

You need to work on overall refining of your design.

Did you make this in photoshop?

08-02-2018, 03:05 AM

D4rk Wrote: Thank you sir <3 Took 2 days to make this since it was my first ever E-Sports Logo

Since how long have you been doing graphics generally?

08-02-2018, 03:09 AM

Demon Wrote: It's pretty cool.

You need to work on lighting, doesn't look consistent.

Tounge and teeth don't have highlights or shadows.

There are some rough areas. Theres a weird bump on top of stroke. The stroke on the bottom covers the text. There are some white parts around the black stroke. Bottom of the wolf's chin, is a buttchin. It's causing weird point under chin stroke.

The text's atempt at making it look shine looks awkward.

You need to work on overall refining of your design.

Did you make this in photoshop?

I have no idea could have easily been AI But I'm going to grab the File off my PC when i get home.

Also, thank you younoticed things that completelyslippedmy mind lol Now I have to Dig up the file to Fix it.

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08-02-2018, 03:20 AM

Carpesir Wrote: Since how long have you been doing graphics generally?

Professionally 4 Years. Freelance about 6.

Oh wow, that's pretty long. How have you started if I might ask?

And, if you got the time of course, could you evetually create a profile picture for me when I pay you in credits? Would pay in /$ but since I don't have a job/get no money I can't :D

08-02-2018, 03:22 AM

D4rk Wrote: I have no idea could have easily been AI But I'm going to grab the File off my PC when i get home.

Also, thank you younoticed things that completelyslippedmy mind lol Now I have to Dig up the file to Fix it.

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Professionally 4 Years. Freelance about 6.

It seems theres a "gap" between the paths.

08-02-2018, 03:26 AM

Demon Wrote: It seems theres a "gap" between the paths.

I Did GFX as a noob for about 2 years doing freelance work. & then got office Jobs for the last 4 years. 2 Years Learning & then last 4 have been learning more while working Fulltime.

A think i'd keep in mind is text hiding, look what happened here.



You don' want to cover just a little bit of the text, it looks off and it weakens the design overall!
A thing you could take in consideration is removing the city/forest below the text and enlarging the text to match the proportions of the wolf as of now it looks a bit small.