How'd you rate my edit?

Please give any advice
I've been looking for a forum like
this

https://mega.nz/file/15Jz1Qjb#ZxIf_NXtaz...Gy5yWrztF0]

Its pretty good i would say

that was a decent work man, always try to go an extra mile with details in each upcoming project.

Nice one i like it ! try to bit a little bit longer

edit was good, concept and color correction was fine, just the flow could have been more better and use graph to modify transitions