Temptated

Tried to follow the metronome some more and add variation :c

https://soundcloud.com/user-horizon/temptated-1

23-08-2016, 03:47 AM

Horizon Wrote: https://soundcloud.com/user-horizon/temptated-finished

update

That was a lot better.
Good job c:

Sounds really great, I'm not a fan of the tune change at :31, though. Sounds like it went from chill to depressing.

https://soundcloud.com/user-horizon/temptated-finished

update

This is something I can get down to

After the "And we are back" I am personally not a fan of the beat. But it is good quality wise. Just personal preference.

Also the beginning sounds like scratching nylon

23-08-2016, 04:59 AM

Zenith Wrote: This is something I can get down to

After the "And we are back" I am personally not a fan of the beat. But it is good quality wise. Just personal preference.

Also the beginning sounds like scratching nylon

scratching nylon?? whats that

23-08-2016, 05:32 AM

Horizon Wrote:

23-08-2016, 04:59 AM

Zenith Wrote: This is something I can get down to

After the "And we are back" I am personally not a fan of the beat. But it is good quality wise. Just personal preference.

Also the beginning sounds like scratching nylon

scratching nylon?? whats that

not sure how to explain it.

like that weird material that is cold and shit

if you take your fingernail and scratch it back and forth

Posted a finished version I guess, it sounds better at some parts but I think the original may be better :\

https://soundcloud.com/user-horizon/temptated-finished

ver good song nice :D thanks!