Yumeko Jabami Design

Did this design a while back (prob a month) and wanted to know what other people thought of it. I like criticism so lmk!
https://gyazo.com/80e4252c06dcf7d295d80c397e3664e4

not bad, but it's kinda lacking of darker colors. dark are too light.

I think its good enough, but maybe a little more darker will be better

its a thoughtful start. You are thinking outside of the box which is great. I'd find some work you really like and re-create it and then go back and slowly make it your own work.