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what should i change?

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21-02-2023, 06:54 PM
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hello, this is my first try on an album cover, lmk what should i change to make it better.
https://imgur.com/ax6rPJ8
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22-02-2023, 02:39 PM
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I think , it's lacks of contrast tones and image feels just a bit flat . Money and gun feels unnatural so I think you need to play a bit with perspective and with color grading too. Also , i'd add some more shading on a guy , to match his look with environment and made a bit bigger banner "Parential Advisory" to make it more noticeable

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22-02-2023, 04:54 PM
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yes...you should darken the background and make it less sharpe...and also add some grain and light reflections it will help a lot...if you don't understand just look at @supraken on instagram

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24-02-2023, 09:39 AM
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24-02-2023, 12:21 PM
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21-02-2023, 06:54 PM
xtc2900 Wrote:
hello, this is my first try on an album cover, lmk what should i change to make it better.
https://imgur.com/ax6rPJ8
It doesn’t really blend well, try to make compositing better

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25-02-2023, 10:43 PM
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Think it's cool. Angle of the gun is a little off.

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02-03-2023, 03:41 PM
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the perspective of the gun is wrong and the drop shadow could be fixed

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02-03-2023, 03:43 PM
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i think the colors and perspective can be better, but good work

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14-03-2023, 11:06 PM
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Its got a strong lack of color and the proportions of the table are a little off

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16-03-2023, 10:11 PM
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it's very basic the shadows on the table look very fake and it is very texture heavy

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