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what should i change?

Submitted by xtc2900, , Thread ID: 260514

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#21
good luck on the new season of your new season of

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#22
it’s dope but the gun is so out of place it looks crazy fake

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#23
probably the sixth and the forth

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#24
21-02-2023, 06:54 PM
xtc2900 Wrote:
hello, this is my first try on an album cover, lmk what should i change to make it better.
https://imgur.com/ax6rPJ8

Lack of contrast defintly add some of that but it ugly asf

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#25
the drop shadow is throwing off the perspective a little try to lessen it

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#26
for the better dawg self improvement is everything

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#27
21-02-2023, 06:54 PM
xtc2900 Wrote:
hello, this is my first try on an album cover, lmk what should i change to make it better.
https://imgur.com/ax6rPJ8
the picture of him looks too cut and pasted. you might want to filter him in so he can blend with rest of the images

RE: what should i change?

#28
hey! i think you could do a lot to expand on this, but it's a good place to start!

a good tip is to squint when looking at your designs - it helps to determine if there's enough contrast, and if elements pop as they should.

nearly everything in this design is close in value, meaning no one thing stands out. i'd figure out what you'd like to stand out, and work from there.

the image of the person seems to be a lower quality than the other assets used, i'd use a higher quality image if possible. hope some of this is helpful!

RE: what should i change?

#29
Try using exposure layers to add some shadow and light to the image of the person, it looks very flat. I'd suggest using colour balance too to try and colour match a little bit he it blends in more. He very much looks placed over the picture. The shadows below the items on the table have the distance too high, they look like they're floating.

RE: what should i change?

#30
21-02-2023, 06:54 PM
xtc2900 Wrote:
hello, this is my first try on an album cover, lmk what should i change to make it better.
https://imgur.com/ax6rPJ8
the only thing what i need is points

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