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writing a short song

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08-01-2018, 07:51 AM
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doing a little project with a friend who is a producer and i'm recording this tomorrow over a nice, kind of dark, chill beat that he has created as sort of a demo. this will be my first soundcloud track and i wanted to leave the lyrics here to see how you guys like:


hatred (name tbd lol)

Never been depressed, never cut my wrists
But I been sad, yes Ive been heart broke and I know its a
Joke just to think that you couldve been happy but
Hate had to poke his little head into the picture now you

Sitting there all alone wondering how you could be
Better to the someone that never even cared
Its a game, as we all know it, called love
And its played by the Devil and his fucked up thugs

You been staring at the demon this whole time
Making love to it, buying diamond rings and fancy dining
Its even kept you up all night crying
Surprising, it doesnt go away until ya dying

They just want money and clothes
They wanna piss you off until youre about to fuckin explode
They wanna make you lose your mind, lose control
But just keep to yourself, because the Devil wont show


I was gonna keep it light, but then I just grew into a dark mood and I feel like it's a little bit of a mix of Hopsin/XXX. Let me know what you guys think.
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RE: writing a short song

08-01-2018, 11:05 AM
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Looks great. Would love to hear it when it comes out!

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