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So basically someone with very nice grammar and vocabulary, i need you to re write a 1-2 paragraph statement i wrote. im acting like a youtuber i would be nice i you could add in more words



I have a YouTube channel with around 1 million Subscribers.
I am looking for companies to work with as i am going to
be doing video reviews of PC hardware and peripherals.
If you could send me one of your products i would make a
video review lasting around 6-10 minutes and would also

My fans have really been wanting this for a few months now! your company is making a name

How about you post what you wrote and, after we re-write what you have, you choose the best sounding one.

24-01-2016, 10:55 AM

KOOPAOU812 Wrote: How about you post what you wrote and, after we re-write what you have, you choose the best sounding one.

Thanks, i don't know why i didnt think of that

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Updated the post with my text!

Here you go.

Hello, I have an YouTube channel that has approximately 1 million Subscribers. I am looking for companies to work with because I am going to be doing video reviews of both PC hardware and peripherals. I would appreciate it if you could sent me one of your products so I could make a video review lasting between 6-10 minutes. Moreover my YouTube friends and fans have really been waiting patiently and kindly for a few months now! This means I can not only promote your company and it's name but I will also be making my YouTube subscribers happy.

I used a lil bit of improvisation

I own and run a YouTube channel with approximately 1 million subscribers. Im looking for companies whod like to advertise and get their products in front of a large following. Ill be doing video reviews geared primarily towards PC hardware and peripherals. If youd like to send me one of your products, I could put it in front of a large audience with a video review, highlighting the positive attributes of your product.My fans have been anxiously awaiting product reviews that I can verify, review and stand by. And I believe there's no better to keep my fans happy, while pushing a product that works, yours.



Still your words for the most part I just made it more appealing for product owners, simple but to the point. I also may have added too many contractions but meh. (Also I'd like someone to critique it if possible for the shits, giggles and different perspectives .)
PS:I know the last sentence is lame, but there's nothing wrong with a little butt kissing.