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24-01-2016, 10:27 AM
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So basically someone with very nice grammar and vocabulary, i need you to re write a 1-2 paragraph statement i wrote. im acting like a youtuber i would be nice i you could add in more words



I have a YouTube channel with around 1 million Subscribers.
I am looking for companies to work with as i am going to
be doing video reviews of PC hardware and peripherals.
If you could send me one of your products i would make a
video review lasting around 6-10 minutes and would also

My fans have really been wanting this for a few months now! your company is making a name
stains hit my phone cus im trapping lik a bitch, face timing with the plug but my phone on 3%, i got pounds i got zips but i could never serve a nick

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How about you post what you wrote and, after we re-write what you have, you choose the best sounding one.
?As for the end of the universeI say let it come as it will, in ice, fire, or darkness. What did the universe ever do for me that I should mind its welfare? -Stephen King, The Dark Tower

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24-01-2016, 11:36 AM
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24-01-2016, 10:55 AM
KOOPAOU812 Wrote:
How about you post what you wrote and, after we re-write what you have, you choose the best sounding one.

Thanks, i don't know why i didnt think of that

Updated the post with my text!
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24-01-2016, 12:51 PM
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Here you go.

Hello, I have an YouTube channel that has approximately 1 million Subscribers. I am looking for companies to work with because I am going to be doing video reviews of both PC hardware and peripherals. I would appreciate it if you could sent me one of your products so I could make a video review lasting between 6-10 minutes. Moreover my YouTube friends and fans have really been waiting patiently and kindly for a few months now! This means I can not only promote your company and it's name but I will also be making my YouTube subscribers happy.

I used a lil bit of improvisation Smile

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24-01-2016, 12:56 PM
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I own and run a YouTube channel with approximately 1 million subscribers. Im looking for companies whod like to advertise and get their products in front of a large following. Ill be doing video reviews geared primarily towards PC hardware and peripherals. If youd like to send me one of your products, I could put it in front of a large audience with a video review, highlighting the positive attributes of your product.My fans have been anxiously awaiting product reviews that I can verify, review and stand by. And I believe there's no better to keep my fans happy, while pushing a product that works, yours.



Still your words for the most part I just made it more appealing for product owners, simple but to the point. I also may have added too many contractions but meh. (Also I'd like someone to critique it if possible for the shits, giggles and different perspectives .)
PS:I know the last sentence is lame, but there's nothing wrong with a little butt kissing.

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