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How could I make my t-shirts better?

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13-08-2021, 04:38 PM
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nice work! it's cool how u made it

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19-08-2021, 01:25 PM
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That's great work. Maybe with some liquid effect instead of smoke might be better but that's my opinion.

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25-08-2021, 03:46 PM
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maybe you can add more depths by looking how the fonts look like embossed

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25-08-2021, 08:03 PM
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I personally feel the style of the fonts and the graphics don't gel well. Maybe if the dragon was embossed/3D it might work better. Also try giving the art some breathing space, add negative space to the edges by reducing the artwork size a little so that the focus is narrowed towards the design instead of being scrambled across the entire square.

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26-08-2021, 01:33 PM
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Maybe consider a more unified feel overall. Now I feel that the graphic image and photographic smoke are not completely in balance. Otherwise I love the design.

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28-08-2021, 01:57 AM
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looks dope in my opinion, try it on black tshirt mockup

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04-09-2021, 09:38 PM
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The best way to make them better is to keep making new designs consistently

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06-09-2021, 02:57 PM
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Nice man, try keep all the elements the same so the chrome would be better for me with a more 3d rendered dragon and likewise, maybe a flat font with a more jap feel would better the work! Nice though!

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09-09-2021, 05:35 PM
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Sometimes you keep overthink and you mess up with the design this looks good to me

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09-09-2021, 05:41 PM
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Just put all things together I feel you 2d with 3d it doesn't go well together
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