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How could I make my t-shirts better?
Submitted by EyeStay, 24-05-2021, 03:27 AM, Thread ID: 207201
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RE: How could I make my t-shirts better? 13-09-2021, 10:10 PM #21 It looks nice but I think you should work on layout/ balance... the top of the design doesn't look balanced with the bottom... plus make sure the colors work well with each other. Keep it up!
13-09-2021, 10:10 PM
#21 It looks nice but I think you should work on layout/ balance... the top of the design doesn't look balanced with the bottom... plus make sure the colors work well with each other. Keep it up!
RE: How could I make my t-shirts better? 27-09-2021, 02:15 PM #22 Improve the font, it looks kinda pixelated, looks like an xbox 360-ps2 tokyo game, if it is the vibe you wanna give, then it's GREAT, but if it isn't look forward for a font with more definition, also the smoke looks kinda "meh" because of the black background, maybe a fade would improve it a lot.
27-09-2021, 02:15 PM
#22 Improve the font, it looks kinda pixelated, looks like an xbox 360-ps2 tokyo game, if it is the vibe you wanna give, then it's GREAT, but if it isn't look forward for a font with more definition, also the smoke looks kinda "meh" because of the black background, maybe a fade would improve it a lot.
RE: How could I make my t-shirts better? 28-09-2021, 07:59 PM #23 I would lighten the amount of smoke to the design while centering the top text more then tweaking the side text down a size. The effect on the chrome looks a bit choppy on the edges and the texture look the Japanese writing needs some work. I guess it really depends the look your going for as printing would be pricey if it isn't DTG but a more simple color scheme would look good on this design (ex: single colored main text, Japanese text a different color, while having the dragon in similar color scheme)
28-09-2021, 07:59 PM
#23 I would lighten the amount of smoke to the design while centering the top text more then tweaking the side text down a size. The effect on the chrome looks a bit choppy on the edges and the texture look the Japanese writing needs some work. I guess it really depends the look your going for as printing would be pricey if it isn't DTG but a more simple color scheme would look good on this design (ex: single colored main text, Japanese text a different color, while having the dragon in similar color scheme)