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Made a new track! :)

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30-01-2018, 02:18 AM
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So I made this new track, just wanting some feedback, Smile
Hope you guys enjoy it,
Working with a couple vocalists right now, gonna be releasing some more shit soon,


https://soundcloud.com/user-220932746/horizon

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30-01-2018, 02:24 AM
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Compared to the music i think the vocals are too clear, since its lo-fi try and make the sound like it was recorded on an old recorder with some imperfections!
Overall good job!
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30-01-2018, 02:27 AM
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30-01-2018, 02:24 AM
usopp Wrote: Compared to the music i think the vocals are too clear, since its lo-fi try and make the sound like it was recorded on an old recorder with some imperfections!
Overall good job!

Cheers man, and I get what you mean, Im trying to go into the genre of Lo-Fi, thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it!

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zState Wrote: Cheers man, and I get what you mean, Im trying to go into the genre of Lo-Fi, thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it!
You can clearly see the difference between the music and the vocals, they should be reworked as one!! Welcome dude!
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30-01-2018, 02:41 AM
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I like the beat, it's maybe a little bland. The vocals just don't suit for me, which is fine, just my taste.
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30-01-2018, 02:46 AM
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Faded Wrote: I like the beat, it's maybe a little bland. The vocals just don't suit for me, which is fine, just my taste.


Okay I get you, what would you say you could see me improving on? or any advice you may have?

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zState Wrote: Okay I get you, what would you say you could see me improving on? or any advice you may have?

Beat wise I wouldn't really know, just make it a little more complex and not as repetitive.
Your vocals are pretty bland as well, it doesn't have the "feeling" in it. I can't really tell you how to improve since I'm not a vocal trainer or a musician in any way.

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Faded Wrote: Beat wise I wouldn't really know, just make it a little more complex and not as repetitive.
Your vocals are pretty bland as well, it doesn't have the "feeling" in it. I can't really tell you how to improve since I'm not a vocal trainer or a musician in any way.

Best of luck to you in your future endeavours.


I get you bro, Cheers for the feedback!
You too!

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sounds good like 8/10 but yea its good Keep up the good work

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The beat is pretty good, I like the rhythm. Nice work !

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