Made a new track! :)

So I made this new track, just wanting some feedback,
Hope you guys enjoy it,
Working with a couple vocalists right now, gonna be releasing some more shit soon,


https://soundcloud.com/user-220932746/horizon

Compared to the music i think the vocals are too clear, since its lo-fi try and make the sound like it was recorded on an old recorder with some imperfections!
Overall good job!

30-01-2018, 02:24 AM

usopp Wrote: Compared to the music i think the vocals are too clear, since its lo-fi try and make the sound like it was recorded on an old recorder with some imperfections!
Overall good job!

Cheers man, and I get what you mean, Im trying to go into the genre of Lo-Fi, thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it!

30-01-2018, 02:27 AM

zState Wrote: Cheers man, and I get what you mean, Im trying to go into the genre of Lo-Fi, thanks for the feedback man, appreciate it!

You can clearly see the difference between the music and the vocals, they should be reworked as one!! Welcome dude!

I like the beat, it's maybe a little bland. The vocals just don't suit for me, which is fine, just my taste.

30-01-2018, 02:41 AM

Faded Wrote: I like the beat, it's maybe a little bland. The vocals just don't suit for me, which is fine, just my taste.

Okay I get you, what would you say you could see me improving on? or any advice you may have?

30-01-2018, 02:46 AM

zState Wrote: Okay I get you, what would you say you could see me improving on? or any advice you may have?

Beat wise I wouldn't really know, just make it a little more complex and not as repetitive.
Your vocals are pretty bland as well, it doesn't have the "feeling" in it. I can't really tell you how to improve since I'm not a vocal trainer or a musician in any way.

Best of luck to you in your future endeavours.

30-01-2018, 03:15 AM

Faded Wrote: Beat wise I wouldn't really know, just make it a little more complex and not as repetitive.
Your vocals are pretty bland as well, it doesn't have the "feeling" in it. I can't really tell you how to improve since I'm not a vocal trainer or a musician in any way.

Best of luck to you in your future endeavours.

I get you bro, Cheers for the feedback!
You too!

sounds good like 8/10 but yea its good Keep up the good work

The beat is pretty good, I like the rhythm. Nice work !